
Real Leaders Don’t Use the Word “Led”
Discover why using the word “led” on your resume can undermine your leadership potential and how to replace it with powerful, specific verbs that showcase your true accomplishments.
The most important thing to do if you want to build a compelling resume is ensure that every single bullet on that resume outlines a result worth caring about. Your resume should show an admissions committee, recruiters, or a prospective employer that, 1. you understand how your individual achievements and professional experience translate to the bottom line for the companies and organizations you’ve partnered with, and 2. you can communicate your contributions in a succinct, logical, and compelling manner. The Resume Protocol CEO Test will help you bring your bullets up to scratch on both fronts. Carry on for more resume rules of the trade!
So you’ve learned how to improve your resume format and how to really write to your resume audience (any audience!), but how do you know that your reader will actually care about what they’re reading, your key achievements, career goals, or transferable skills? By putting your resume bullets to the CEO Test – that’s how!
Think of your resume like a movie trailer.
It doesn’t tell the whole story; it shows you the sexiest scenes so you will want to see the whole movie. That’s what a resume is supposed to do. Most people unconsciously think that their resume is supposed to SUMMARIZE their career to date. But that’s not quite right! Instead, it’s supposed to highlight ONLY the BRIGHT SPOTS!
And bright spots in business can be reduced to the bottom line. The bottom line is given by this simple equation:
Even when an organization has social impact objectives, they are still measurable in terms of bottom line impact – a simple measure of the sum total results of the organization minus the cost involved in reaching those results. So for a company like Coca Cola, the bottom line is all the revenue they earn from selling Coke minus what it costs them to make, market, and distribute the Coke and take care of the Coke brand.
For an organization like Doctors Without Borders, the bottom line is the number of people whose lives they save or improve measured against the cost of providing those services.
Take note: I am not claiming that the whole world can or should be reduced to profits. But in the world of business, everything can and will be. Professional accomplishments or fundamental leadership experiences, however you may have perceived them, don't make the cut if they didn't translate into positive annual revenue shifts. Unprofitable companies can’t survive, and social organizations that don’t create more good than they cost will likely disappear.
What this means for your resume is that you need to be able to trace your own impact to the bottom line and communicate it in those terms, to take your technical skills, relevant experience, and career progression and derive measurable benefit. Remember, when you get to the interview, the subtler aspects of your experiences will have a chance to shine.
But the resume is black and white, so learn to understand your impact in CEO terms.
Here’s the test: If the CEO of your company were to read your resume bullet, would they shake your hand? Would they care that you did that? Or would they stare blankly with indifference?
The CEO is responsible for the workings of the entire company, so they will likely be unconcerned with the job duties or responsibilities of any one member of the team. Results, on the other hand, especially those that translate to the bottom line, are a matter of CEO concern.
You want each of your bullets to showcase concrete examples of results that you produced and where you excelled vis-à-vis expectations, targets, or peers.
Consider these examples of passing and failing resume bullets:
Notice how the word “responsible” gives us no information about the content of your work or the outcomes produced. It’s an absolute no-no as a bullet-opener.
Let me repeat that: no resume bullet should EVER begin with the words “Responsible for.” Ever. Just never.
The second bullet here totally reframes the content not in terms of the “task” that was assigned, but in terms of what got created.
What you are told to do matters little. The initiative you take to create something new and change the status quo for the better matters a lot.
Who you presented to, who trusted you, and who liked your work isn’t the best kind of impact you can show. Early in your career, it’s easy to think that being tapped by a senior executive to do something is an impressive achievement because it shows that an important person trusted you. But the reader doesn’t know that executive. It’s much more meaningful to showcase the work you did that generated or justified that trust.
Also note that in the last sample bullet the impact is “drove a recommendation.” You might think that is a weak result, and in some sense it is. This is why many people get frustrated with consulting jobs and move into operational roles – so they can own not only the thinking but also the implementation and outcomes. Service providers (bankers, consultants, lawyers, etc.) don’t really own the outcome, the client does. So if you are in one of these functions, look to see how your work impacted your team’s work and outcome when you are unable to see how it affects the client.
In this case, the owner of the bullet managed to do sound analysis that his team leveraged in the final client service recommendation. For an early career consultant, that is a great outcome!
Consider these last two side-by-sides:
You can see how much more powerful the bullets are when they are associated with outcomes. In the first case, the result was reaching a positive outcome under severe constraints. In the second case, it was an acknowledgement from the CEO himself. In both cases, it is easy to see how this candidate excels vis-à-vis challenges and expectations and displays key achievements and even leadership skills.
If you’ve got all your bullets passing the High School and CEO Tests with flying colors, the final step to resume bullet mastery is to make sure your bullets are logical.
Once you have refined your understanding of the results you have produced in your work and couched each bullet on your resume in lay terms that a high school graduate could understand, it’s time to make sure your bullets pass the Cause and Effect Test.
If you have really considered the impact of your work and ensured each bullet passes the CEO Test, then there’s a good chance you’re also passing the Cause and Effect Test. But it happens occasionally that even though a bullet delineates a clear result, it’s unclear how the candidate directly achieved that result. (And that’s a definite no-go. The reader needs to be able to easily connect you, as the actor and hero in your life story, to the results you describe.)
Let’s consider an example:
This bullet passes both of the previous tests: It’s clear that the CEO would care about this fact, and anyone with a high school education can follow this language. But what’s unclear is exactly how the candidate achieved the result. If the reader can’t connect the dots between your actions and results, then you will get partial credit for them at best.
Now we can see!! The candidate produced this result through her analytical skills – she looked at a big data set, extracted some valuable takeaways, and used those key skills to drive profitability improvements. Now we want to give her a job!
Let’s look at a few more.
The promotion (effect) is connected to its cause (the candidate’s excellence on two specific dimensions).
Notice how much more credible the candidate appears because the cause and effect are both clear. The results in the CEO Test will be very hard to contextualize and relate to if you don’t clarify the specific actions you took to achieve them.
With a resume that scores high marks for its readability, meaningfulness, and specificity and operates under a logic that is both apparent and easy to follow, you can rest assured that you’re doing everything possible to establish that vital connection between your life achievements and your audience. More than that, you’ll be exercising the muscle of good communication.
But if it feels like there’s still something missing – if you aren’t sure that your resume will be the one to really stand out from the stack – take a closer look at the personality encapsulated in (or conspicuously missing from) your greatest hits list. And once again, we’ve got you covered. In the final piece of my Resume Protocol, I’ll teach you how to breathe life into your resume – how to make it vivid.
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